Sunday, October 29, 2006

My Angel

I saw the torrential rain,
The cool breeze augmenting the exotic ambience.
Amidst the silence of the night,
Was the huge roaring of those nimbus clouds,
Intruding into the divine stage,
Set for perhaps a special occasion.
Depicting the maiden appearence of my Angel....

There I saw, a splendour that dazed my eyesight,
Coz for a moment i thought i was blinded by the holistic sight,
Though my memory wasnt smouldering out,
It got signals that were beyond my sensory perceptions.
As i felt my hormonal activity take control,
A beautiful figure appeared before me,surrounded by a halo,
And i knew it, for sure, was the maiden appearence of my Angel....

With the ocean waves soaring high, I felt ever so close to Nature.
And finally my efforts were rewarded,
For i got a glimpse of my beautiful Angel,
As she looked into my face with those mystical eyes,
I noticed the most beautiful creature alive on earth.
I was too stunned to respond,was momentarily seduced,
Relishing the flavour of the Utopia....

Alas! came the terrible momnet, the time to part,
I had hardly been able to have a full comprehension of her.
She smiled at me, killing all the nuerons in my cerebrum,
Took all my senses from me (if there were any left!!!).
And as she bade me goodbye, i slowly regained human form.
I wish i had poetic expression,
To articulate her beauty into humanly percievable form,
Else I would be a sinner to inappropriately express the loveliness
Of my Angel....

AMIT RAIZADA
29/10/2006.

Copyright © Amit Raizada 2006. No part of this text shall be reproduced without proir permission from the author.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Amit.. Nice to see ur poetry.
I don much understand poetrylogy still ur thoughts r really nice.

Gud job.. keep ur soul expressing!!

Amit Raizada said...

Thanx kapil....

Anonymous said...

superb!!!

Subin said...

Wish I could also have a mystical rendezvous with my angel, like the one described in your consuming poetry ;)

Anonymous said...

amit ............this is a really good one from u ..........this reflects ur conpicious poetic abilties ............i really good one i must say

Amit Raizada said...

hey bhagwaan...now who is this anonymous???????
anyways...thanx for da apprecitaion.... :)

Anonymous said...

i am ur angel

Amit Raizada said...

well if thats wat u feel.....i guess u r 200% in illusion.....[:D]
My angel doesnt use internet.....[:P].....she doesnt know a thing about blogging......ok......
njoi.....

paramita-ur frnd said...

the peom is beautiful

never let die ur poetic abilities
chao!!!